Hopless Romantic123

OK, so not a bad story. I got the point and the plot pretty well. The only thing that I would really say is that almost not enough imagination went ...

It's rare that I read a piece of work with such vivid descriptions for a characters surroundings. I loved how you compared the characters thoughts to feelings and nature! Very ...

I love the fact that you took one of you favorite plots from one of your favorite movies and continued it. I love doing the same thing every time I ...

Over all a very nice job. The story seemed to have a good plot and it was obvious that the climax was clear. I agree with the fact the the ...

Over all I thought your story is well done. My comment to you is not so much about your story, but rather the comments posted before. You mentioned that you ...

Wonderfully done! I have just re-posted your poem with my own little side comments. Please don't take offence to any suggestions, they are just my thoughts. Trying to make it ...

[b]Very well done. I am impressed with the way you showed how much the relationship between Ron and Hermione had changed. The only suggestion that I would make would be ...